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The Trouble with Cats by *SitkaReign:iconSitkaReign:



Too many times I rise
in obeisance to passionate mewing
then open the front door and watch
the gray tabby stand there, quite still
as if suddenly overcome by a feline epiphany
of unknown nature.
The Siamese, though, is a man of action,
climbing a curtain in the blink of a cat-eye
to kill and eat a rare butterfly
and cough the whole thing up with
hair and white sauce on the Persian rug.
The brown kitten is a she-devil,
a demon possessed beast
coming for the damned with
a hairy arm scraping and pawing
under the bathroom door while I cower with
the latest issue of Field and Stream.
Yet one warm day when I should be
staring at the ocean, I almost see
a black cat, gone these five years,
standing in a white sink, tail skyward,
drinking affectionately
from a narrow stream of proffered water.
He kept me warm on winter nights
and waited by the gate when I was out walking.
A quiet despair settles like night,
a lonely place
from grief for all the dead
that left joyful footprints
across this empty landscape.
These furry problems, these wild rebels
come with troubles, like all my true friends.
©2007-2009 *SitkaReign
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Author's Comments

I finally had the time to move this from rough draft to final. God bless San Francisco. Did you know that Robert Frost was born here?

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:iconthebellman:
lovely

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“The job of art is to chase ugliness away” - Bono.
:icongarnet-43:
I like it. It flows nicely. I think it would lend itself well to being read aloud.

I especially like the part about what a cat's 'great idea' would be.

Reminds me of why I don't like cats.

Actually, I don't mind cats, it's just that I'm allergic to them.

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconwilwar77:
tis true you speak I know it well
:iconvix0r:
I agree that it would lend itself to being read aloud. Very nice piece. I never owned a cat until last year, and your poem does a good job of capturing, simultaneously, the annoyance cats can be when they're in the mood to be little shits, as well as the sort of befuddling way we can develop deep bonds with them.

Nice poem. I don't see anything I'd change.
:iconsitkareign:
Napoleon hated cats. Too hard to subjugate.

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The world is deep--and more profound than day would have thought.
:iconsitkareign:
btw, cool I.D. pic.

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The world is deep--and more profound than day would have thought.
:iconthebellman:
*bow*

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“The job of art is to chase ugliness away” - Bono.
:iconifuwuraself-helpbook:
The end is quite priceless. I enjoyed it very much and I feel as if I need to cuddle my kitty now.
the beginning was a bit story-bookish but it works for this piece.
Is it strange I think it's cute when a cat eats a bug. (I hate bugs)

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It really is a shame about raisins

Often times I find myself wishing I could be a metaphor.

Satine says "YES. I NEED YOUR POETRY NOW!"
:icongarnet-43:
:D What a control freak. I guess control freaks and cats don't mix. Not that I'm a control freak...

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin

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